Clever use of Bitsy. A series of honest portraits of cardiograms and the narrator’s thoughts on them. The writing doesn’t attempt to elevate or downplay the reactions of the narrator, all it does is say what it needs to say.
Great visuals and writing! Really enjoyed that. I just wish you took opportunity of the medium and added some kinds of sound to enhance the experience, although I understand if it was meant to be a silent work of art :)
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Clever use of Bitsy. A series of honest portraits of cardiograms and the narrator’s thoughts on them. The writing doesn’t attempt to elevate or downplay the reactions of the narrator, all it does is say what it needs to say.
And I think that restraint is quite apt.
as someone with a VSD my entire life this hit me hard. very accurate.
This was a wonderful little thing!!! Very enjoyable love the writing style!
oh, this one hit hard. gorgeous writing and visuals, just such a solid little package, thank you for sharing it <3
This is beautiful, the spiralled echocardiogram at the end was striking and strangely moving. Amazing work!
Great visuals and writing! Really enjoyed that.
I just wish you took opportunity of the medium and added some kinds of sound to enhance the experience, although I understand if it was meant to be a silent work of art :)
Good job!
i love this!! the ending is perfect.